作文
作文形式
- 名人名言式；the important of +主题词 = 正面话题（弘扬正能量）
- 提出问题:消极话题——the important of……
- 书信、通知
- 开放式写作：讨论性写作（即同不同意）
写作的三要素
字迹、字数
词汇
举例
坚持
persistence = sticking to = making resilient efforts = make constant personal endeavor = owing down-to-earth attitude = perseverance
价值观
moral values = traditional values = moral awareness
方法
- 名词 ->doing sth ;n of n;
- 词组 Be beneficial to;be conducive to;be key to ; lay a solid foundation for;Attachg great importance to；play a role in be harmful to ；pose a challenge to; be detrimental to;对…有害 pose a threat to 对...构成威胁
- 各种的好处（万能好处）
- 提高自信（知识等等） broadening our horizen；（拓宽我们的视野） improve the abality of the relationship with others; （改善与他人的关系） realing our advantages and flaws;（认识到我们的优势和缺陷） releasing our academic burden;（减轻我们的学业负担） improving the ability of coping with the challenges；（提高应对挑战的能力） improve the working efficiency；（提高工作效率） improving the capability of pursuing knowledge；（提高求知能力）
- 环境 maintaining the eco-blanace（维护生态平衡） keep the biodiversity（保持生物多样性） cultivate /foster/ develop a good habit（培养/养成/养成好习惯） cultivate our problem-sloving(comprehensive ;practical)skills（培养我们解决问题（综合;实用）的技能） keeping optimistic mindset（保持乐观心态） keep pace with times（与时俱进） with a critical-mind（具有批判性思维）
- 科技 such digital devices facilitates our daily life 此类数字设备方便了我们的日常生活 such as buying good online 比如在网上购买商品 sharing information through social media 通过社交媒体共享信息 enjoying our leisure time by online game 通过网络游戏享受休闲时光 acquiring free courses through online learning platforms 通过在线学习平台获取免费课程 combat the adversity and hindrance( setbacks ;obstacles） 克服逆境和障碍（挫折;障碍）
句子——只写主谓宾
一谓定江山
云南地大物博风景秀丽 -> 主谓宾一致的结构 => 云南省是美丽的，云南省有丰富的自然资源
Yunnan is very beautiful and has abundant natural resource
Yunnan is very beautiful,with abundant natural resource
What the saying indicates is the importance of self-confidence，an attitude(a quality、a traditional merit）that we should take toward our life
Students excellingin spoken English should bepreferred Factors pointed by the experts are as follows Confidence lays solid found ation for our ultimate success
Individual success Unsurpassed success Ultimate success Taste the fruit of success Gain an ever-bright prospect Owning a promising future
写作框架结构
正面话题框架结构
the important;the value;the awareness；
第一段
As the old saying goes,“抄题干". It tells us that＿＿＿＿.
老话说的好，"＿＿＿＿".它告诉我们＿＿＿＿。
"「 」"is a proverb full of logic,which has been generally accepted.
It aims toinstruct us that 主题词 is an extraordinarily valuable element necessary to succeed in academic performance,life journey andcareer prospects.
The symbolic meaning of the picture(the saying) is to show us that a high value should be
put on + 主题词.
主题词 + is key to (doing sth)
“「 」”是一句充满逻辑的谚语，已被普遍接受。
它旨在告诉我们主题词是在学术表现、人生旅程和职业前景上取得成功的非常有价值的必要因素。
这幅画(这句谚语)的象征意义是告诉我们应该赋予+主题词。
主题词+是(做某事)的关键
举例: The symbolic meaning of title is to show us that a high value should be put on social practical abilities , which has been generally accepted. Cultivating practical abilities are key to improving our comprehensive and problem-solving ability
开放式的开头一一对比作文的话题
Opinions about+抄题干+vary from person to person，but from myperspective + 题干肯定题干否定.
图画 行为动作（坐；跑；站；跳）+地点状语+be+人+who+谓语+宾语 举例：The picture depicts an annoying scene sitting on the boat are two immoral visitors who randomly throw rubbish into the lake
第二段
As far as I am concerned，主题词 are essential to our life for the following three （two）reasons.
Firstly,1句 What I think is thatfrom my perspective,/for my part主题词带来的好处具体的好处／万能好好处／五大弘扬句式结构 Secondly，主题词+好的动词+词组.
For example，具体举例；3句反论证however， those who+主题词的反义词，are more likely to grow unhealthily in an un balanced way,with limited success./ such an attitude/ manner/ spirit can produce a lasting energizing effect,granting us a fruitful and meaningful life (a life without regrets)
第三段
Based on the above analysis/In short,主题词 lays the foundation for us to set ambitious goals,overcome formidable obstacles and then reap the happiness of success.As anold saying goes/as sb,同位语，puts it 主题词 is the pyramidal cornerstone for success.
模版
「 」is a proverb full of logic, which has been generally accepted.
（「 」是一句充满逻辑的谚语，已被人们普遍认可。）
It aims to instruct us that [具体品质，如 self-reliant（自立）等] is a valuable element necessary to succeed in [列举相关方面，如 academic performance（学业表现）, life journey（人生旅程） and career prospects（职业前景）].
（它旨在教导我们，[像自立这样的具体品质] 是在 [学业表现、人生旅程以及职业前景等方面] 取得成功所必需的宝贵要素。）
Firstly, the importance of [该品质，如 self-reliant] cannot be overemphasized/overstated in our personal growth.
（首先，[像自立这样的品质] 在我们的个人成长中，其重要性再怎么强调都不为过。）
Secondly, [该品质，如 self-reliant] is key to cultivating the comprehensive and problem-solving skills in modern society full of competition.
（其次，在充满竞争的现代社会中，[像自立这样的品质] 对于培养综合能力以及解决问题的能力来说是关键所在。）
For example, according to the survey conducted by [具体权威来源，如 China Daily 等], most of the [相关群体，如 expert performers（优秀表现者）] attach great importance to such high quality.（例如，根据 [《中国日报》等具体权威来源] 所做的调查，大多数 [像优秀表现者这样的相关群体] 都非常重视这样的优秀品质。） Such a spirit can produce a lasting energizing effect, granting us a fruitful and meaningful life.（这样的精神能够产生持久的激励作用，赋予我们充实且有意义的生活。）
Based on the above analysis/In short, [该品质，如 self-reliant] lays the foundation for us to set ambitious goals, overcome formidable obstacles and then reap the happiness of success.
（基于上述分析 / 简而言之，[像自立这样的品质] 为我们设定远大目标、克服艰巨障碍并收获成功的喜悦奠定了基础。）
负面批判框架结构
根据正面改
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「 」is a common phenomenon that has been widely noticed. It aims to show us that [具体负面行为或品质，如 excessive dependence（过度依赖）等] is a harmful element that may lead to failure in [列举相关方面，如 academic performance（学业表现）, life journey（人生旅程） and career prospects（职业前景）].
Firstly, the negative impact of [该负面行为或品质，如 excessive dependence] cannot be underestimated in our personal growth. It weakens our ability to make independent decisions and take actions, which is crucial for our development. (首先，在我们的个人成长中，[像过度依赖这样的负面行为或品质] 的负面影响不容小觑。它削弱了我们独立做决定和采取行动的能力，而这对我们的发展至关重要。)
Secondly, [该负面行为或品质，如 excessive dependence] is an obstacle to cultivating the essential skills and qualities in modern society full of challenges. For example, according to the research carried out by [具体权威来源，如 a certain educational institution（某个教育机构）], a large number of individuals who have [such negative quality（这种负面品质）] often struggle to adapt to new situations and solve problems effectively. This may result in a series of setbacks and a less fulfilling life. (其次，在充满挑战的现代社会中，[像过度依赖这样的负面行为或品质] 是培养基本技能和素质的障碍。例如，根据 [某个教育机构等具体权威来源] 进行的研究，大量具有 [这种负面品质] 的人往往难以适应新情况并有效解决问题。这可能会导致一系列挫折和不太充实的生活。)
Based on the above analysis/In short, [该负面行为或品质，如 excessive dependence] poses a serious threat to our pursuit of success and happiness. We should be aware of its harm and strive to overcome it by gradually building up our independence and self-confidence, so as to create a more prosperous and satisfying future. (基于上述分析 / 简而言之，[像过度依赖这样的负面行为或品质] 对我们追求成功和幸福构成了严重威胁。我们应该意识到它的危害，并努力通过逐步建立我们的独立性和自信心来克服它，以便创造一个更加繁荣和令人满意的未来。)
两面性结构
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「 」is a topic that has been widely discussed and it is commonly acknowledged that it has both positive and negative aspects.
（「 」是一个被广泛讨论的话题，并且人们普遍认为它具有正反两方面。）
On the one hand, the positive side of [该事物] is 显著 in [相关领域或情境]. It can [具体阐述正面作用或带来的好处，例如 enhance our efficiency（提高我们的效率）] and help us to [达成的目标或获得的成果，如 achieve better results（取得更好的结果）] in [列举相关方面，如 academic study（学业学习）, daily work（日常工作） and social life（社交生活）]. For example, [举例说明正面影响，如 when we use certain advanced technologies（当我们使用某些先进技术时）, it enables us to access information more quickly and conveniently（它使我们能够更快速便捷地获取信息）].
（一方面，[该事物] 的积极面在 [相关领域或情境] 中很显著。它能够 [具体阐述正面作用或带来的好处，例如提高我们的效率] 并帮助我们在 [列举相关方面，如学业学习、日常工作和社交生活] 中 [达成的目标或获得的成果，如取得更好的结果]。例如，[举例说明正面影响，如当我们使用某些先进技术时，它使我们能够更快速便捷地获取信息]。）
Moreover, [该事物] also contributes to [其他积极方面，如 promoting cultural exchange（促进文化交流）]. It breaks down barriers between different regions and allows people to share and learn from each other's cultures, which enriches our spiritual world and broadens our horizons.
（此外，[该事物] 还有助于 [其他积极方面，如促进文化交流]。它打破了不同地区之间的壁垒，使人们能够分享并相互学习彼此的文化，这丰富了我们的精神世界并拓宽了我们的视野。）
On the other hand, we cannot ignore the negative impacts of [该事物]. It may lead to [具体负面结果或问题，如 excessive stress（过度压力）] in some cases. For instance, [举例说明负面影响，如 the overuse of mobile phones（手机的过度使用） has caused problems like decreased face-to-face communication skills（导致了面对面交流能力下降等问题）] and has a negative effect on our [相关方面，如 interpersonal relationships（人际关系）].
（另一方面，我们不能忽视 [该事物] 的负面影响。在某些情况下它可能导致 [具体负面结果或问题，如过度压力]。例如，[举例说明负面影响，如手机的过度使用已经导致了面对面交流能力下降等问题] 并且对我们的 [相关方面，如人际关系] 产生负面影响。）
In addition, [该事物] sometimes gives rise to [其他负面情况，如 environmental pollution（环境污染）] when it is not properly managed or used. This not only damages the ecological balance but also threatens the sustainable development of human society.
（另外，当 [该事物] 未被妥善管理或使用时，有时会引发 [其他负面情况，如环境污染]。这不仅破坏了生态平衡，还威胁到人类社会的可持续发展。）
In conclusion, [该事物] is a double-edged sword. We should be fully aware of both its advantages and disadvantages and make rational use of it. We need to take measures to maximize its positive effects and minimize its negative impacts, so that it can better serve our life and society. （总之，[该事物] 是一把双刃剑。我们应该充分意识到它的优点和缺点并合理利用它。我们需要采取措施将其积极影响最大化并将负面影响最小化，以便它能更好地服务于我们的生活和社会。）